Thursday, May 2, 2013

The First Order

The First Order (MFM)
Safeword LLC 1
by Peyton Elizabeth
Heat Level: SEXTREME

Becca Schuler has always fantasized about bondage, but does that really make her depraved? According to an ex-boyfriend, it does.
After losing her job, and with no way to pay her rent, Becca hits a local bar to drown her sorrows. The last thing she expects is to meet a mysterious woman who assures that she can make Becca’s dream a reality. Is there really a company called Safeword LLC that places submissive women with dominant men per their preferences on a simple application?
Knowing she has nothing to lose, Becca fills out the form on Her placement lands her in the sensual and strict hands of Lane and Ross Ellison, who train her to be their ideal submissive. But when Becca’s fear of not being perfect weaves its way into their lives, she sets out to be just that and unknowingly risks losing it all.


Sensual, sexy and stimulation overload describe Peyton Elizabeth’s new novel, The First Order, Safeword LLC. The First Order finds Becca Schuler walking through the doors of Safeword LLC, where the perfect matches are made for a submissive and Dominants. Becca has always known that vanilla sex was not for her and decided to take a chance when an elegantly clad business woman approached her in a café and handed her a business card that would change her vision of the world.

Becca is introduced and placed in the very capable hands of twin brothers and Doms, Ross and Lane Ellison. Together the three negotiate and explore the relationship they all desire and need.

Peyton Elizabeth took this reader to new heights as I read the book completely captivated and absorbed in the characters.  Ms. Peyton Elizabeth’s description of Becca created a beautiful soul that desired true love and understanding, while allowing herself to be fully vested in the relationship she forged with Lane and Ross. The author placed me on sensory overload as every touch and caress emanated from the pages. True submission goes beyond giving your body to another, but more importantly giving your soul, your total being. The First Order demonstrated this as the author described Becca’s inner turmoil and desires in allowing herself to be owned by two strong and dominant men. Becca’s submission was aptly written; held no misconceptions and allowed the reader to feel every nuance.

Although Lane and Ross were portrayed as two very dominant males, I felt an underlying sense of insecurity and commitment phobia in their venture for the perfect submissive. As I read further into the story, I surmised that the insecurity I detected was not necessarily in the commitment stance but in realization that the submission was the commitment. Although both Lane and Ross saw Becca for the beautiful person she was, inside and out, it wasn’t until the relationship reached an impasse that the desired truth finally emerged.  Lane, Ross and Becca were an exceptionally beautiful ménage, they complimented each other in personality and spirit.

The sexual connection was brilliantly written, descriptive and sans vulgarity. The sexual scenes added beauty and connectivity to the story and were not an afterthought thrown in, simply because. The First Order left the door wide open for subsequent books as we were introduced to enigmatic and colorful character.

This reviewer has a new favorite author as I look forward to reading more of the series, Safeword LLC.  

Definite S.E.X.
A five handcuff review.

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